Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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[10/31/2018, 12:45:29 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
Here is your essay. Thank you!
Hi bạn,
Mình có một điểm chưa đồng ý chỗ này:
“You have two supporting ideas here, but none has a specific example. It is worth spending time to search in the internet for real life examples, then you can increase your band score.”
==> with purchasing antiques in many parts of the world and sponsoring for archeological activities standing out as compelling epitomes. Đây là ví dụ ở đoạn 2 của mình.
Could you please check?
Và, mỗi đoạn nên có 1 ví dụ đúng k bạn?
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