• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 10 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • dinhduc304

      Participant
      September 22, 2017 at 11:06 pm

      Discuss about advantages and disadvantages of science and technology

      Nowadays, science and technology have developed so much which helped solve many problems, howeverm they also bring about another problems. With me, this idea is true.
      Advances in science and technology help us have better life such as people over the world can be closer together by smart phone, computer, internet. The factories make many useful products. They make people’s life to be more convenient. But they aslo created many negative problems. If we use them, depend on them so much, they can affect the health of people such as become short-sighted, have headaches. Besides that, they make global warming worse by the CFC it gives off because CFC traps the heat on the earth when it goes up.
      To solve these problems, parents should restrict their children about the time of using technology in order to protect their health. In addition, we must plant many trees, use environment friendly technology so that clo from CFC can be decreased.
      In summary, science and technology are important in our life, so we use them effectively to reduce their harmful effects

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    • anna229112

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      September 24, 2017 at 7:55 pm

      [13:55:17, 24/9/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      September 25, 2017 at 10:55 am

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