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4. If a product is good and can meet people’s needs, people will buy it. Advertising in the media is no more than a form of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely argued that whether advertisement is an extremely type of entertainment or not. This is because if an item is useful and able to reach customers’ expectation, they will be bought; therefore, there is no need for broadcasting them in the media. While I accept that people may feel pleased when advertisements are prohibited, I disagree that this kind of entertainment should be treated as a way of relaxing
On the one hand, there should be limitations to the ways of broadcasting on the trade market for some reasonable grounds. Firstly, some advertisings are the break when people watch their favourite programme. This is considered to be the most irrigating act to interrupt one’s feeling. Furthermore, many of the classified advertisements are unlikely to attract the clients. This is because they appear with a boring content all the time, which is an extremely unnecessary point.
On the other hand, the publicity for the products is a pivotal process in making one’s trademark. Some customers are unlikely to find the appropriate products if they are not informed clearly about there needs. So in this case, promotion plays an intergral part in either supporting further information or satisfying the customer with their requirements. Take two types of smart phones as a prime example of this: Oppo f1s and Vivo v5. Although the two seem to be equal in both quality and price, but Oppo is better at advertising its products than Vivo. As a result, Oppo is more successful in the commerce and atracts a larger people using this phone rather than Vivo.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that annoucing is an annoyance for some individuals, but this is by no means that advertising is no more than a kind of relaxation.

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