Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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WRITING TASK 2- OPINION
Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of negative effects. To what extend you agree or disagree?
Some people think that it is logical to stop advertisments which try to approach children. However, there are also some highly-valuated samples affecting their attitude and behavior in the good side.
Firstly, more and more advertisings have an effort to get benefits by attracting children. If goods specially toys, cinema movies for children become new styles, it will be easy and simple for companies to improve the comsumption of products quickly. Children may beg their parents to own the hottest trends of these brands t show off with their friends. Gradually, pursuing these processes can create their bad habits and behaviors.
However, there are also some useful contents of advertisements that develope warm sentiments in the childre `s heart or encourage them to enhance their creativity and curiosity of learning new essential things in life. I think that it is really wonderful to educate people at the early age their leisure time. On the other hand, children are also the target object of a product. It is certain that companies need to market their goods to customers. In contrast, children and their parents also have demands to get information about things that they intend to purchase. Therefore, banning all of advertisements directing children is completely illogical.
To sum up, I think that only advertising activities causing badly to children should be stopped. Meanwhile, advertisements that are well-constructed with highly educational characteristics should have the permission to spread widely on television as well as other facilities of social media.[3/11/2018, 7:50:48 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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