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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, people purchase a substantial number of products that is prevalence through the development of commercial’s industry. However, it seems a tendency by the widespread advertising in space-age society. Although the former opinion is agreed by many, I personally believe that the excessive employment in consuming goods is the result of commercial.
On the one hand, there are many convincing explanations to support why the process of advertisement is necessary for each individual’s needs. First and foremost, advertising reduces the distance between us and products. To be more specific, it informs about the use, merits and the available of other similar products. From there, people have more options about products. Secondly, as far as recently repost, commercial can increase the purchase of products and thanks to that, advertising helps enterprises to sell their goods as many as possible. As a consequence, cooperation will receive significant amount of profits and contribute more to improve standard of life as part of their profits is compulsory tax for the society.
On the other hand, people with a contrasting viewpoint maintain that the daily consumption of citizens is not their real demands for below reason. Nowadays, no one can deny that there are a bunch of untruths in an advertising film, leading people to the temporary awareness losing. To be more specific, commercials sometimes cause impulsive purchase thus the exaggeration and eye-blinding techniques employed in the advertisement which overshadow the true function of products.
To conclude, while advertisements bring a lot of benefits to our lives, assists us in the way we buy and sell products, I still hold a firm belief that it exists drawbacks for consumers.

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