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Some people say that it is the responsibility of individuals to save money for their own care after they retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that it should be compulsory for each person saving their budget for their demand after they stop working. Although this opinion is supported by many, I personally believe that every citizens including retire ones should receive appropriate treatment.
On the one hand, there are many convincing explanations why people should save up whenever it is possible. First and foremost, apart from daily needs such as food or medicine, they also need to have adequate amount of money for other concerns. For instance, they might want to travel or their family members unfortunately have some problems. As a result, saving may be a solution for every arisen demand. Secondly, saving is not only necessary for the elders but also for their children. The government just allocate for only people who retire. Therefore, they still need a bunch of money to prepare for their kids’ future.
On the other hand, people with a contrasting viewpoint maintain that the authority should support the elderly people financially. Initially, this is considered as not only a duty but also a present for the elders’ contributation to society. To be more specifically, they had been working for straight years, hence, the provision of annual or monthly fund is a way to show the government’s respect and gratitude. Another angle can be found is the fact that those elderly people do not have any alternative way to earn money due to their olds. Therefore, they should be especially taken care.
To conclude, while saving up for individual’s demand as well as prospective concerns is important, I still hold a firm belief that the authority should take the responsibility of bringing a quality life for the older group.Attachments:
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