[Thắng Phước]

Studies show that criminals get low level of education . Some people believe the best way to reduce the crime is educating people in prison so that they can get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree?

Researchers has illuminated that the people who commit crimes are usually low-educated. Therefore, some people support the solution to educate prisoner so that they can get a job when released, I completely agree with this idea.
Firstly, to overcome the prejudges and to get over the discrimination of the ordinary people, acquaintances or even relatives is always a deterrent against those prison who want to get back to live in a decent way. Being educated to get a job means they probably be able not to depend on anyone’s money and can decently earn living. Only by this way can the released prisoners have better image in other people’s eyes. On the contrary, when leaving prison without any job qualifications, it is really hard for the prisoners to earn living and then they easily become a burden which is usually looked down by society.
The second factor should be considered is the amount of expense. The prisoners have to spare on living. There are so many circumstances that the prisoners after being released from jail is stuck not only by discrimination of people but also having no way to earn money. Therefore, getting a job can help them make enough money to settle down for a normal like instead of returning back to the old round of criminal life.
For the reason I mentioned above. I suppose educating prisoners in jail is the best way to minimize the number of crimes.

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Thang,

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