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[7/19/2018, 9:56:56 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
There has been much controversy about placing choices in children’s hands. While it may lead to selfishness with some individuals, I believe that competence of making decisions at early stage of life would wield more desirable effects.
On one hand, letting children freely make decisions by their interest tends to form egocentric person. Due to their young age as well as their immature, it’s likely that they choose food, clothes and unwind activities without considering their parent’s financial statue and other people’s suggestions which are directly affected by their choice. Furthermore, when they are used to getting all the needs met, they tend to demand everything they want by any prices, which bring a great deal of detrimental impacts on communicative behaviors in their latter life.
One the other hand, from my point of view, chances for children to decide their own daily matters seem to bring a great number of benefits to themselves. Firstly, exposure to many options and capacity of selecting one cultivate their confidence and their determination, without which children appear to over-rely on their parents. Secondly, taking account of their selections helps kids nurture their critical thinking which is one of the most vital factors of successful person because they have to be responsible for the consequences of their choices. Moreover, the choices that they make, like their outfit’s color, sports they play…contribute greatly to the personality’s forming process. For example, if a kid is into tomboy style and they have rights to decide the way they dress, they can comfortably express their personality through the look instead of being forced to wear clothes they detest.
In conclusion, it is my firm conviction that the over-indulgence of children’s decisions could make them become selfish; however, children who can make their own decisions could benefit forementioned advantages.

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[diemlinh]

[7/23/2018, 9:19:53 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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Bạn giải thích hộ mình phần suggestion này của bạn có nghĩa là gì nhé “letting children freely make decisions by their interest would more likely /tend to behave egocentrically.”

[diemlinh]

Hi bạn,
ý mình muốn nói là : để trẻ tự do quyết dịnh theo ý muốn sẽ làm trẻ có xu hướng cư xử theo ý mình mà không nghe ý người lớn trong tương lai”
->letting children freely make their own decisions would be more likely /tend to behave egocentrically when they are adults/in the future.
Best,
Linh.

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Hi bạn,

Mình đang băn khoăn ở mặt ngữ pháp hơn. Vì sao chủ ngữ là letting children mà động từ lại là behave egocentrically được. Ý mình câu đó phải viết là letting children freely make their own decisions would be more likely /tend to MAKE THEM behave egocentrically.

Bạn giải thích cách hiểu của mình đúng chưa nhé

Tks

[diemlinh]

Hi bạn,
To be honest, your suggestion “letting children freely make their own decisions would be more likely /tend to MAKE THEM behave egocentrically” is quite unnatural and wordy to me.
Tend to means to be likely to behave in a particular way or have a particular characteristic, so “make them” is quite redundant here.
And there is no grammatical error here.
Best,
Linh.