Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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[20:03:30, 26/11/2018] Cám ơn các bạn.
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Write at least 250 words?
Music plays a must-have role in our life. Development of music results in the appearance of a wide range of music type. This essay will discuss why music is necessary for everyone and if the importance of traditional music of a country will outweigh the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays.
Music is considered to be one of the vital part in our life. First, music is a way people express thoughts and feelings through lyrics and voices. Optimistic or pessimistic, excited or depress,…etc, all these feeling are express though songs, which helps us understand the whole range of human emotions and experience in the most spiritual language that no words can present. Second, it features largely in all histories and all cultures and indeed has been one of the main ways of passing on cultural traditions to new generations of the country.
In the modern world today, many people say that the international music heard everywhere deteriorate traditional music. Viewed from many angles, folk music consists of a variety of tradition value. However, it is gradually less common in young age. Teenagers nowadays are mostly keen on loud modern foreign songs as a result of globalization via the Internet. Music industry is believed to be one of the most developed one which profits billions of money every year by organizing live tours, selling albums,…etc. Young people interested in international music as this is a way bringing them to new languages, new music stars and so on. People need to balance between traditional and international music to have knowledge about our own custom as well as expose ourselves to globalization trend in this modern era.
In conclusion, music is a vital part in everyone’s life. Traditional music need to be preserved and it is also essential to expose to international music. Balancing, remaining and develop simultaneously are believed to be the best way to bring music to people.[01:45:02, 25/12/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!
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