• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • trangdtp

      Participant
      August 8, 2017 at 6:00 am

      Writing task 1
      Test 5 – Cam 12

      The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian adults frequently practicing exsercies in six different types of age in 2010.
      It shows that most of Australian women over twenty-five year olds have behavious of doing physical activities more regularly than men while young men from fifteen to twenty-five year olds usually do more excercises than young women.
      Starting from the highest rate of 52.8% of men doing regularly physical activity at the age from fifteen to twenty-five, the percentafe of male afterward decreased significantly among the group from twenty-five to thirty-four until hit the bottom of 39.5% at the age from thirdty-five to forty-four. Above forty-five year olds, men used to do excersie gradually increased and reach precisedly 46.7% for people over sixty-five year olds.
      By constrants, the women starting from the lower point than men at 47.7% but slightly grew up and reached the peak of 53.3% at the age from forty-five to fifty-four. The female aged from fifty-five to sixty-four mostly remained stable around 53%. However, above sixty-five year olds, that figure dropped off to just 47.1%.

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    • clov.2299

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      August 9, 2017 at 11:45 pm

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