Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
1. The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
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The given bar chart illustrates factors that influence the performance of employers, whose age are from 18-30 and 45-60 at a major company. Overall, opportunity for development is the most influential factor to the younger group while money is considered the most important to the older one.
As the graph shows, there is up 90 results from workers who aged 18-30 reveals personal development is first priority at work of this age group, which is 3 times as many as that of people aged 45-60. By contrast, work environment is the least affective element for young people, at around 30 results. Advancement prospects and relaxed working environment are the second influential factors, at equally 80 results.
For older employers, wages affect their performance the most, at 70 results. Team spirit is the second influential factor to people who age 45-60, which is equal to that of group aged 18-30. In comparison, job security influenced least to older group, at 20 results.Attachments:
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