Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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As children become adults their social behavior changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children’s social behavior and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
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The drastic change from children to adulthood of human have been noticed by scientists. The main difference in social behavior of these two generations is the establishment of independent and this change is beneficial for the modern world in creating an equal world for everyone.
It is noticeable that adults and young children have vast different levels of independent. As young children, human have to live with an adult. They eat what the adults provide for them, they listen to what the adults say and they grow strong attachment to these mature creatures. As growing older, youngsters demand more privacy and independent. They expect people around to treat them as an adult rather than some child. They develop their own interests and beliefs. The need of self-supply is important to adults.
Furthermore, this change is crucial because it is the foundation to the establishment of modern government. The establishment of independent helps people to form their own opinions, their point of views, and their moral compasses. People are able to differentiate what right and wrong, what they support to get and the meaning of the action to gain what they want. It gives meaning for people to combat the previous out-of-date authorities where lower-class people right were suppressed by upper class. It helps people realized the best government is the one who considers every person from every walk of life is equally vital for the society and they should be treated equally.
In conclusion, the crucial change between children and adults is the sense of independent. This change helps to form the modern equal society for everyone.[9/8/2019, 10:44:55 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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