• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Khổng Vân Anh

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      February 28, 2018 at 2:00 pm

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      Task2 : Topic: In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

      After leaving high schools, it are advised that some young people should spend a year on seeking a job or travelling. Both these decisions have their own benefits and back- draws
      On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of seeking a job or going discovery the world. Firstly, students may meet a lots of challenges. They can get at risk in the travelling as robes and rapes. They also may be sick in climate changes and this is quite dangerous while they are not standing by their family. Another back-draw is that they may have negative overviews about the real world after the first shock of life without spending several years in universities. Because they are too young and lack of experience to solve these problems. For example, a young student will be shock in a drastic competitive environment of a company. This leads to negative sense of students.
      On the other hand, decision to work or travel as soon as graduated high school is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, young people can learn a lots of society skills from experiencing such as communication skill and solve problems skill which is necessary tools for their future job. As a result of they become more mature and easier success than others. For example, My best friend spent a year after graduated high school to seek a part-time job, every she have to work a range different jobs and interact with variety of people, therefore she good at communication and easily solve problems in her life. Furthermore , working and travelling also expand the horizon of students and give them a large of source knowledge about culture all around the world. And it help them to understand more about the real world, about their own passion and confident to enroll universities. For instance, as I also spend a long time to discovery almost of provinces in my country, this touch me many things which is not only knowledge about culture of regions, but also about the way how do people get rich.
      In conclusion, it is true that choosing to work or travel have both their unique advantages and disadvantages. However, it is based on each individual’s point of view.

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    • joannespham

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      February 28, 2018 at 10:16 pm

      [3/1/2018, 10:16:19 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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