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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy usage and greenhouse gas emission in an Australian house by six different categories
Overall, the most common energy usage in an average Australia household is for heating purposes. As a result, it is evident that the largest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions also comes from heating.
Firstly, 72% of total energy used in an Australian home is to make the house warmer, including 30% for water heating and 42 % for other heating. In contrast, only 7 % energy is consumed for freezing and 2% is used for cooling. In addition, while appliances account for 15% of energy consumption, the figure for lightning is 4%
In terms of greenhouse gas emission, while heating generates the nearly 50%, accounting for 32 % for water heating and 15 % for heating, cooling represent the smallest percentage, at 3 %. It is obvious that gas emitted from other appliances, freezing and lightning doubled those of energy usage, making up 28%, 14% and 8 % respectively.

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[Chau Nguyen]

This is your corrected essay. :)

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