Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change this negative attitudes?
Global tourism is becoming increasingly popular. However, it is often said to exert adverse impacts on destination resorts. This essay will discuss the reasons why international tourism is perceived negatively and put forward several solutions for this issue.
There are two primary reasons why local people often find global tourism not beneficial. First of all, it has undesirable influences on traditional aspects of the host countries. In fact, many foreigners visiting other nations often disregard the culture of those places and have a lack of respect for local inhabitants. It is also widely acknowledged that international tourism has been polluting the environment around the world. Not only do visitors produce a great amount of non-biodegradable waste such as plastic bags, plastic cups, and bottles but they also use a lot of energy and resources, namely water, electricity, and oil. For example, in many
well-known destinations in the world such as Hanoi, Beijing and São Paulo, those cities are suffering greatly from water pollution, soil contamination and a huge amount of garbage thanks to the flourishing tourism industry around the world.However, measures must be taken by the travel agencies and the governments to mitigate the problems. First, companies should be aware of the cultural and environmental consequences of tourism and therefore have effective solutions. In other words, they can use leaflets and launch programs to inform tourists about the traditional customs and indigenous practices of the host countries, allowing the visitors to understand and pay respect to the destinations. Moreover, it is a recommendation that the national leaders enforce strict regulations on businesses and tourists. A number of countries, Singapore for instance, impose heavy taxes upon those who violate the laws, from which those nations benefited a lot.
In conclusion, only by addressing the concerns of local people will oppositional attitudes to global tourism be changed.
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