• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Duy

      Participant
      February 6, 2018 at 4:00 pm

      Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.
      What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

      In recent decades, having children later in life has become a growing trend
      for many reasons. Although the trend is not without disadvantages, the
      upsides can justify these.
      There are a number of reasons leading to that trend. First, in order to
      compete in the job market, many couples choose to focus time, effort and
      money on their careers. It is clear that delaying parenthood enables
      couples to work longer hours and with higher commitment, which results in
      better salary and wages. Second, many young people nowadays understand the
      magnitude of child rearing responsibility. For example, feeding babies and
      teaching them require a great deal of patience and hard work, which
      discourages many would-be parents.
      There are also advantages and disadvantages of that trend. As for the
      upside, those who delay a family can have time to get more done, either at
      work or in life, making them happier overall. In fact, studies have shown
      that people who have the time to do and travel more when they are young
      have a higher level of happiness than those who do not. Nevertheless,
      giving birth later in life does pose certain risks that might affect a
      woman’s health as well as her baby’s health. That said, although older
      woman have an increased risk of having a child with birth defect, the
      probability is still slim.
      In conclusion, the sacrifices of starting a family at young age are too
      overwhelming compared to they are otherwise. Young couples should also
      consider their own situation to make the best decision.

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    • truongminhtri210595

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      February 7, 2018 at 6:36 pm

      Please kindly check!

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