Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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[11:26:49, 5/7/2019] Cám ơn các bạn!
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Some people think that children should obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others believe that children controlled very much are not well – prepared for their adult lives. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
One of the highly controversial issues today relates to whether children may conform to whatever their family arranged for their adult life or may live independent. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then give my own opinion on the matter.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of preparations beforehand from parents and teachers for pupils considerably outweigh advantages of self-children’s adaptation in the future. The main reason for believing this is that completing relative’s directions help children adapting their mature lives faster and safer. It is also possible to say that parent and the teacher are wonderful instructors, and they know what thing is suitable for their kids. One good illustration of this is parent often try to help their children enrolling in schools which have good reputation to prepare a supreme background for their potential career in the future.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact pupils who depend on their family excessively are wounded afterward when they do not have their parent’s directions in their adult lives. People often have this opinion because these children might not think actively how to tackle difficulties, and they just wait their parent to replace them on finding solution. Therefore, these kids are difficult to live as the grown-up without parent’s dependent.
In my opinion, both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the best way for comprehensive children’s growth is that they should self-prepare for the adulthood without prior parent’s arrangement.[7/6/2019, 3:11:56 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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