• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 12 months ago 3 Members · 6 Posts
    • Trinh

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      August 1, 2017 at 9:56 am

      Some people think that increasing the number of police officers on the street is the only effective way to reduce crime. Do you agree or disagree?

      These days, some individuals contend that acquiring more police officers on every roads is the most efficient way leading to the degradation of offenders. While this may suit many people, I would believe that there are other ways of decreasing the crime rate nowadays.
      On the one hand, boosting a larger numbers of police officers might fight against various crimes. For instance, a police man with a gun can discourage people from commiting to a crime. This is because criminals are likely to be made aware of being detected, especially the shoplifters or the pocketings. Furthermore, this act can assist the local government to control the area more closely as well as deter criminals from carrying out a crime. Consequently, the authorities may find appropriate ways of dealing with the problems caused by offenders
      On the other hand, there are various measures to tackle this problems rather than increasing the number of police officers. Firstly, governments should raise the living standard of the adverse backgrounds, which is the main purpose pushing people to resort into crime. Poor children may find it hard to integrate into society, as a result, they would desire to steal from the others as a usual habit. Gradually, this might have a negative influence on the youth , breeding them to become future criminals. Secondly, more resources should be invested to improve the education, especially in the rural areas. In other words, more schools should be constructed for the local children to either nurture them to be good citizens since they are little students or raise awareness about law-abinding to them . Education is the best method to deter humans from starting a crime life.
      In conclusion, enhancing the amount of police officers on every street is a suitable approach to diminish the illegal activities, but this is by no means that there are not any other methods to manage this serious situation.

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    • anna229112

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      August 4, 2017 at 8:32 am

      [08:32:28, 4/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 6, 2017 at 6:36 pm

      Cảm ơn bạn.

    • Trinh

      Participant
      August 7, 2017 at 9:32 am

      Dạ…
      Cho em hỏi là bài mẫu ở đâu vậy ạ… =)))

    • ivynguyen

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      August 7, 2017 at 10:11 am

      Bạn ơi bạn check cấu trúc bài mẫu chi tiết trong file đính kèm nhé. Cảm ơn bạn rất nhiều.

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      August 7, 2017 at 10:12 am

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