[Phoenix]

Describe a popular product made in Vietnam/ a native product/ a special product that is made in your region.
You should say:
what the product is
what it is used for
how it is made
and explain why your country produces this thing.

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[Nguyễn Ngọc Thịnh]

Band: 4.0
1. Fluency and coherence
– You did not use any linking words, which made it hard for listeners to follow the thread of your arguments.
– When brainstorming, try to think of about two ideas to begin with. In that way, you can roughly divide your speech into two main parts; the beginning of each part is signified with such words as “First”, “To begin with”, “For starters” or “Second”, ”Additionally”, ”What’s more”.
– You can begin your speech in a more subtle and less explicit way by saying, for example, “As with many countries, a lot of products are manufactured in Vietnam, but the most notable one has to be its books.
2. Grammatical Range and Accuracy
– Most sentences were a bit simplistic in structure but enough to fulfil the requirements of this task.
– Various grammatical errors were audible, especially in terms of plural/singular words. However, they could have been caused by your pronunciation.
3. Lexical resources
– Vocabulary is not varied, and at times you have to stop to think about word choices
4. Pronunciation
– A lot of work is needed to improve your pronunciation. If unsure, go to Google and search “define + word” for definition.