[Phoenix]

Describe an event that changed your life in a positive way
You should say:
What it was
When it happened
Where it happened
and explain why this event is a happy event in your life.

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[Nguyễn Ngọc Thịnh]

Band: 3.0
1. Fluency and coherence
– There was some dead time, but not to the point that it should compromises your speech significantly.
2. Grammatical range and accuracy
– On one instance, you may have used inversion to diversify your structures.
3. Lexical Resources
– From what I was able to hear, your vocabulary is adequate for the task
4. Pronunciation
– Unfortunately, this is extremely problematic and makes your entire speech indecipherable. I apologize for not giving thorough feedback but I could not make enough sense of what you are saying.
– It would be helpful if you would include a transcript of your speech in order for me to give better feedback.
– I suggest that after you write the transcript, use the dictionary to check for pronunciation, focusing especially on the ending clusters, and practice speaking multiple times. In fact, you can choose any English articles and do the same. In addition, listen more to English conversations, through movies for example, and try to mimic the pronunciation.