• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Lam Nguyet Duyen

      Participant
      March 17, 2018 at 11:10 pm

      Writing task 2
      Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
      In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
      Has this become a positive or negative development?
      Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
      In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
      Has this become a positive or negative development?
      Topic: In the modern society, Developement of technology make people’s life are better. Many people can change information together in quickly. But it makes the types of relationships people are cold. I thinks this has become negative development.
      In this case, many people belong to technology making the relationship are really cold. We are together in place, but the most people are silent and just play own cellphone. In the meeting for gathered together becomes “applied” technology place. Making the heartfelt emotion becomes callous. And connecting rope is more and more distant.
      Example, I and my friends usually go to cafe on weekend. Although we are together, I do not or sometimes talk a few sentences. Because almost friends were playing own cellphone.
      Addition, my cousin, she is 16 years old, who is beautiful girl. After school, almost time she was in her room and locking door. My uncle could not see her all day expect meal time. She do not talk with every one and go out expect going to school. She always uses cellphone for chatting, playing, reading book. I thinks she is living the imaginary world.
      If the people find emotion and loving in the imaginary world in the cool. The will lose connected together in the real life. And now, be study to respect a moment with family, friends.
      In my opinion, development of technology has negative in relationships people./.

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    • dongmanhkien

      Participant
      March 18, 2018 at 11:25 pm

      Thank you for sending your work!
      If you have any question, don’t hesitate to ask :”)

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