• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    trucquynhnm updated 8 years ago 2 Members · 2 Posts
    • vuvietphuong1236

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      July 25, 2017 at 12:01 pm

      Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food.Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people.Others think education will not work.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
      The development of food industry make it easier for people to have a ready meal.This emerge phenomenal caused that enormous people are detrimental to their health by eating too much take-away food .Many people believed that the effective therapy is educated people about disadvantages of junk food and advantages of following an healthy diet whereas others believed that this education will not succeed in universalizing awareness .From my perspective ,education is the best way to resolve this problem.
      In the 21st century , the appearance of serious illness caused from eating too much junk food such as cancer,diabetes,stomach ache and particular obesity which make people concern about their health .However,in fact, the enormous amount of people ignore the health warning to continue this horrible habit .Firstly,the fast food is more delicious than others which satisfied with all ages.With the cheap standard price and serving in a short time ,specialy a variety of tasty dishs to choice that people became great fans of junk food.Secondly,most of people belived that this type of food will not effect in their health if they do a plenty of exericises after having a high calorie meal but we have been in lead a sedentary life style for along time .Overeating too much calorie food make people fall in obesity situation.Thirdly ,popular people aware of the risk from eating ready meals, but they cannot control their emotion in hungry.That is reason why people was educated about the disadvantages of fast food but they try to eat them.
      On the other hand ,In my opinion ,educating people about the detail information of junk food gave impressive result .The concrete evidence shows us that the amount of people eating fast food as habit decreased sharply than before .The emerging of unsafe quality from KFC make people not trust in this type of food.Nowadays ,additionally ,junk food not only be the highest calorie food but also be irresponsible attitude of fast food companies. The awareness of people from media means,challenges their self is the effect of education which apply in anywhere to warn about the disadvantages of junk food.
      In conclusion ,most of people are effected by educating .this bring some particular benefit that we cannot deny active result .In my views, the best therapy to resolve this problem is educatie people .

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    • trucquynhnm

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      July 26, 2017 at 2:38 pm

      Please find attached your feedback. Keep up the hard work!

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