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Some people think that Robots are very important to Human’s Future development. Others think that They are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that robots are very necessary to human’s future progress, while the opponents of this idea prefer to the fact that they are harmful and create potential bad effects to the whole society. While there are disagreements about this special machine, I find myself more convinced to the fact that robots do have many advantages that contribute to the development of a society.
On the one hand, robots are considered to be the risky ones for some reasons. Firstly, they are produced by a numerous of stages, but if the production has one small flaw, it is likely to make a dangerous tool instead of a helpful gadget. Secondly, this useful machine can lead to some bad habits of individual. For example, if a man has a housework-robot in his house, therefore, he is likely to be lazy because a smart robot can do these usual work for him. This could be worse if a robot is an alternative for the students and do their assigments, so that they are deprived from being creative or active in class.
On the other hand, I believe that robots are real wonderful tools that can enhance the progress level of the society. Nowadays, they are able to do the variety of things for human, especially the most strungling one. Not only do they can use their power, they can also use their brain, which is considered as ” Artificial Intelligence”. This contributes a great source of information that human beings are not likely to find out. Furthermore, robots help the community improve rapidly by doing the voluntary work such as cleaning up the beach or funding for the poor, keeping the whole city an ideal place to live in.
In conclusion, while robots do have some negative points to the society, it seems to me that the advantages they bring about make them the best machines.

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