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Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many debates about achieving success in life based on diligence or not. Many people believe that devotion of work is the most determinable, whereas others believe that the importance of wealth and outward appearance have to be taken.
It is true that the industry is one of the factors, which bring many advantages in life. Firstly, people who are diligent will be respected. When people work and study hardly, they will obtain a lot of real experience and knowledge, which will help them to get the recorded of colleagues. Secondly, some certain jobs expect higher level qualifications, which require people spend a lot of time to complete courses with great devotion. It seems evident that some particular career such as doctor, teacher or scientist need at least a university degree. Thus, people have to achieve academic excellence with diligence to get a rewarding occupation.
Besides, admittedly, richness and appearance play an integral part in life now. Firstly, with wealth, business will start easier because any start-up operation will need a guarantee fund, which will bring many facilities like great office and productive employees. Secondly, there are certain occupations whose market offer a standard of outward appearance. Those jobs like an actor, singer or model require appearance in order to stay relevant in the public eye. It would be difficult to become a successful actor without being charming and good looking. In fact, many artistS have to be cosmetic surgery to gain a foothold in the entertainment industry.
In conclusion, the diligence is always important factor in life, but money and appearance also bring many advantages.

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