Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
People should look after their health for personal benefit rather than a duty for society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to healthy lifestyle, some people argue that the inhabitants should do it for their own benefits instead of social duty. In my opinion, I partly agree with this point of view.
There are some reasons why people are encouraged to staying healthy for social needs. At first, citizens are viable human resource for a country to develop. In terms of national security, mortals who join army are required to have mental and physical strength so that they can protect their nation from enemies. Secondly, in labor forces, healthy employees are essential for effective work. Thanks to high efficient in working, workers in that country is highly-valued , and therefore, gain more opportunity for different job options whether it is within the country or at another places.
On the other hand, it is important for each individual to care for themselves as a way to create more motivation. Due to self-consciousness, people are likely to prolong good health for life fulfillment. For example, to release stress and keep fit, many young people attend sport club or gyms as recreational activities. As they staying healthy voluntarily, they will enjoy what they do. If it was a suty required people to follow, people would feel under pressure and practice with less effort.
In conclusion, I believe that most people should retain a good way of life to benefit themselves rather than paying too much attention from the public concern.Attachments:
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