Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, most newborn diseases can be easily prevented through the process of vaccination. However, some individuals propose that it should be conscripted by law for parents to immunise their children rather than giving them the rights to decide. With this proposal, I do not completely approve as why should our medical treatment be any different in the future.
On the one hand, it is strongly argued that vaccination benefits humanity a lot in the fight against many diseases as it is alternative cure while we are finding an official cure for the diseases. However, side affects may occur during the process of vacination and some of them may cause significant allergies or they can even be fatal if not treated properly.With these consequential risks, it is hard for vacccines to be approved by the society when compelled by law.
On the other hand, vaccines may prove profitable on individuals that do not have any noticing hypersensitivities as they can prevented any fatal contamination in the future. Furthermore, investments on vaccines researchs are tremendously essential due to the fact that each and every year, more than 100 diseases are new to human and more than 100 million people died due to the lack of vaccinations to prevent diseases. Many medical statistics have showned that vaccination is indeed essential to the survivalism and development of humanity therefore it is sensible for us to vaccinate ouseselves and our family for our own benefits.
In conclusion, vaccines have proven useful for the safety of our health and furtherly prevent any diseases, thus we have to protect ourselves by will, rather than be conscripted by any government.Attachments:
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