[Hoàng Gia Bảo]

Some people think that having people who have been in prison become good citizens later to give a talk to school students is the best way to tell them about dangers of committing a crime. In my opinion, I totally agree with this idea.
First of all, resocialized people are living proof because they have been through and understood how prison’s life is. Having these people to warn children is much more effective than coming from authorities, teachers or even parents. They can tell and show student vividly about the dangers, shortage and limitation in prison, for example, the prisoner only have few hours to see the Sun and to practice some exercise outside their jail. One example of those disadvantages that they are limited to meet their family, their friends and sometimes their crimes are serious they cannot see anyone or go outside in a long period.
Secondly, ex-convict can describe the impact of walking into criminal way has been affected by their life. Sentences have a wide range of time that may last in few days, few months or even decades. We all know time is a precious thing and it cannot be found again once it is gone. Some of the ex-convicts may lose their youth, and the others lost the moment when their child was born without their present. All of which will be reappeared through their words and inculcated in school students’ memories.
To sum up, asking former prisons to teach students about the dangerous of breaking the law is a great idea and we should encourage the school to host this session every year.

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[An Thien Ho]

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