[Đỗ Khánh]

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes.

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[Kiều Duyên]

Hi Khanh,
My name is Duyen. Please find attached below your essay corrected by me. If you have any concerns about my correction, please do not hesitate to leave me feedbacks. Thank you very much for joining us. Hope to receive your next essays. Good luck!

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[Đỗ Khánh]

Hi Duyen,

First of all, I thank you for your corrected essay. But I want to ask u some questions relating to the mistakes.

1. Why not “showing too much of her body”. I have read this collocation in a file of Mr. Ngoc Bach.
2. In your comment, u replace “making” by “make”. What reason do u do this for? In this situation, I use “making” as Reduced Relative Clause for whole previous clause.

Please let me know your opinion.
Thank u in advance and Have a nice day.