[Thắng Phước]

It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, travel to other places becoming the tendency of many young people. While some suppose that it is not crucial to travel abroad to understand the cultural knowledge of other country, I would argue that I completely disagree with this idea.
Firstly, the limited resource of books, films or the internet might hinder people to get a throughful knowledge of the culture that they want to explore. Some media just want to attract and propose the tourism industry that they merely write about the goods sides without information about their bad cultural tradition like their weird custom or some conservative way of thinking. And because there are many source of information, it is inevitable that there are some mistaken information that we hardly find if we have never set foot on that place.
Secondly, accessing directly to the culture is a more easy way to learn. Instead of spending hours sticking eyes on the computer destop or book which we usually find boring, travel to the other place to learn is more enthusiastic. We can easily make friends with the native and ask them directly for th custom whether it is bad or good or find out ourselves by taking part in the common activities. By this way, the information about the culture, custom, traditional things will get through our head just by enjoying new experience.
For the reason I mentioned above, I thing learning new things about culture of the other people by travelling to there is absolutely imperative

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[Nguyễn Anh]

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[Thắng Phước]

Dear Nguyen Anh,
Thanh you for fixing my essay and give me some tips for using vocabulary.
Enjoy your day!
Thang,