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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In some nations, the number of mature people living with their families despite having graduated from schools and seeking for jobs is on the rise. While there are some benefits of this trend, I believe that its drawbacks are more significant.
On the one hand, staying at home with parents is advantageous in some ways. Firstly, this may unquestionably gives them countless opportunities to repay their parents for all the love they have recieved in their childhood. Furthermore, when people acquire an educational degree and pursuit of successful career, they are able to support for their families. For example, if a person is capable of getting a good job, he can easily enhance the life quality of his family. Hence, living at home even after being employed offers adults a great time to spend with their loved ones.
On the other hand, this tendency is likely to bring about detrimental effects on the adults themselves. First of all, people who are relied mainly on their parents cannot mature enough to live independently, which may lead to some failures in their future. This is because they are unlikely to obtain some valuable experience that will not be found when being dependent on the other. For instance, an adult can master several soft skills such as problem solving, time management when he is familiar himself with different situations in the society at large. Thus, being unable to live their own life may cause several adverse influences on adults, which are likely to prevent them from managing new challenges.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the downsides of living with family really outweigh its merits in many ways.

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