Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Each individual has different goals in life, such as financial freedom, reputation or physically healthy. While I accept that to achieve these targets based on many factors, I believe that some people think luck is the most important.
It seems evident that diligence and perseverance are two main characters to get success in life. In fact, almost people have to spend a lot of time to complete courses with great industry, with these results they will get a higher job earnings. This wage will take them guarantee life. They can build a house, buy a car or even make the most out of luxury holidays. Moreover, in world history, many scientists spent almost of their life to experiment new invention for hundreds or even millions times, if they did not have perseverance and devotion, they give up early.
However, the importance of luck in life is undeniable. We can see many artists have a natural beauty, which can not have by diligence or perseverance, this lead them easier to gain a foothold in the entertainment industry. Besides, in business field, many young successors have their own empire corporations, although they may be not at all talented. Those people can enjoy a royal life and don not much worry about finance, lucky.
In conclusion, although many people can achieve target easier with their luck, but it does not mean you can not get your own goal by diligence and devotion.Attachments:
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