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The map illustrates the existing plan and the proposed plan to arrange a gallery.
From the left side of the map, in the existing plan, there was a large area which is not belong to the gallery but it is proposed to be a special exhibition space with a small exhibition store on the top left. The center part of the plan was divided into three rooms, including one permanent space on the left and two temporary spaces on the right for exhibition. In the proposed plan, the center area will be rejoined and become a big permanent exhibition room with the main entrace toward the parkinson court.
There was only an entrace from the right of the map which leads to a small lobby next to an office in the current plan but in the suggested plan, the area will be replaced with long room of education with a door to the parkinson court, in front of a little store or plant space.

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