• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • PHƯƠNG TRẦN NGUYỄN HOÀNG

      Participant
      August 7, 2017 at 3:01 pm

      The given diagram demonstrates how people can produce milk from cows. At the beginning, milk are taken from cows and milk products are manufactured after a six-step process. Products from cow milk are packaged and delivered to shops and supermarket at the end.
      At the beginning, people take cows to grass and keep them grazing. In the next step, fresh milk is collected twice a day by a milking machine. After that, milk is refrigerated in the third step and then being delivered by tankers to Dairy, in which some products from milk such as cheese, cream, and butter are manufactured.
      At the Dairy where the fourth step is carried out, milk is heated to high temperature during the pasteurization before being cooled to destroy most of the pathogenic. Milk is then packaged in bottles in the fifth step and transported to supermarkets and shops for shopping display in the end of the process.

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    • Huong Trang

      Participant
      August 9, 2017 at 12:30 am

      Please find the revised version attached and feel free to comment if you have any query.

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