• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • mai25987

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      August 8, 2019 at 6:21 pm

      [18:21:32, 8/8/2019] Cám ơn các bạn!

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      The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment level within those groups. Summerise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

      => The given chart and graph provide information about three items of employees in Australia and the joblessness level within those groups.
      Overall, it is noticeable that workers who were Australian had the most significant percentage of workforce in Australia in 2003. Besides, there was a downward trend in the figure for the unemployed people in Australia during a period of 10 years.
      Looking more closely at the pie chart, in terms of the labour force in Australia by place of birth in 2003, we can see that the proportion of Australian workers took the dominant position at 76%. Furthermore, regarding ESC and NESC employees, they accounted an insignificant percentage of Australian workforce at 10% and 14% respectively.
      As can be seen from the line graph, in terms of the unemployment in Australia by place of birth, it is apparent that in in 1993, the percentage of NESC workers was nearly 8%. By contrast, the figures for Australian and ESC workers were lower at approximately 4%. After six years, the proportions of three items of employees decreased significantly to 4% in NESC workers and almost 2% in both Australian and ESC workers separately with a slight fluctuation from 1995 to 1999. Finally, in the final year 2003, NESC employees took the highest place at 3%, followed by 2% in Australian workers and 1% in ESC workers.

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    • mai25987

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      August 8, 2019 at 6:26 pm

      [18:25:41, 8/8/2019] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • chrisnguyen7496

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      August 9, 2019 at 4:19 pm

      Kindly Check!

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