• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • dinhduc304

      Participant
      September 15, 2017 at 9:12 am

      Topic: Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that ‘money cannot buy happiness’.
      Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?
      Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

      It is agreed that money plays an important role in our life. At anytime, money and happiness is always an arguing topic in society. This essay is to discuss about the decision of money to our happiness.
      If you have no money, you are obviously difficul to afford many things that is necessary for your daily life. Of course, you can purchase whatever you like without any consideration when your pocket say “Yes”. One day you want to travel around the your country or even go abroad, no problem because having money means having all. People do not like you and you feel alone. Don’t worry, money can bring a lot of friend to you. A few days ago, I chatted with my university friend and asked him about his plan with his five-year girl friend. He said that it was 3 years from graduation and he could only get fifteen millions per month. Until he double his salary, he will get married. I just thought whether his girl friend could wait for him or not. It is clear that with some people, money is an key factor to their life and they only get happiness when they don’t have to consider about their wallet.
      But other peole have different opinion that money can not buy happiness. It is clear that beside money, there is other things can make you feel satisfactory. When you live by your enthusiastic heart, take care of everyone, socialize in community and love people as you love yourself, happiness will knock your house without any fee. A woman decided to get married with a poor man because with true love, they can help each other to get over any difficulty.
      In conclusion, this topic will be unending argument but we can agree that money is really necessary with our life but it is not the key of pleasure.

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    • haduyduywru

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      September 17, 2017 at 7:09 am

      Kindly check!

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