Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Due to the development of technology, economics and society, which lead to the new trend that many young people hold the vital authority in the government. Some people believe that only old people have enough ability to responsibility for these positions while others argued that young generation could be in charge of high positions in government. In this essay I would like to discuss both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, a lot of people believe old people base on their real experiences and high academic knowledge. It seems evident that old people obtain much real experiences because they face many challenges, which could help them to be self-controlled and give deep decisions to tackle problems of macro issues such as environment, gender discrimination and terrorist. Further advantage of old people is that they usually have many high qualifications, which makes people believe in their political skill. Additionally, in the government where people have to work with a lot of people from different aspects, the strength of old people is that they could manage and build strong relationships by their social skills.
Even though young generation have the lack of real experience, they still have many advantages while they work at the government. Firstly, at the moment, people are living in the age of information, they have many opportunities to broaden horizons and learn the experience of previous generations. Secondly, In order to show of ability, passion and ambition, they definitely devote their life to the revolutionary cause. Also young people could see what is the weakness in society, therefore they enhance innovative policies and laws.
In conclusion, I strongly think that if young people and old people could work in the government without age discrimination, it will improve the quality of government and make society better.
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