[Duyen Ngo]

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This topic centering on whether fortune is a great contribution to the success or not has come up an open-ended question in recent years. And I totally disagree with this idea.
I believe that those who are hard-working and patient will fullfil their dreams. Steven Jobs, for example, is king of technological world, has built a strong and reputable brand – Apple, which is known as the best choices for all customers. If Steven Jobs had not spent several years on making researches and doing experiments, he would not have had a huge success and his famous brand. Another example is Edison, who received Nobelt Prize for his attribution about the great invention-lights. With his effort and patience, he experienced a thousand of experiments and studies and especially he did not give up when he had diffuculties or problems during his researching period, and finally he made a great contribution to civilized human beings’ lives.
On the other hand, by contrast, success depend on only a little of luck. For example, students can pass their exams due to their luck, although they did not study on this exam, cannot pass other exams or hope that fortune will come back more times. Furthermore, blessing just occcur in some occasions. For example, winning the lotery could be completely attributed to the luck. However, they cannot receive the special lotery reward for the rest of their lives.
In conclusion, no matter how lucky they are, that cannot attain their goals without the industrious and patience.

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