• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    weekend_1994 updated 5 years, 11 months ago 2 Members · 3 Posts
    • weekend_1994

      Participant
      August 19, 2019 at 8:19 pm

      Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people
      think this is a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this
      statement?

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      Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

      Answer:
      Nowadays, there are some heated debated revolving around unwanted subjects that students have to learn. While some people argue that this is frivolous, I would argue that learning every subject is necessary. In this essay, I will discuss the important role of learning every aspect to become well-rounded person as well as the disadvantages of early divided study.
      Firstly, it is crucial for students to learn every subjects. Each of the subjects teaches us some important in life. Math helps students to calculate for example the price of groceries, the bill, etc. Biology teaches children about their body as well as the surround animal and environment. Literature helps students communicating better. Every subject have their indispensable role in our life.
      Furthermore, focusing on certain subjects could create a serious problem. Students who just focus on their favorite subjects and do not study the others will have a gap in their knowledge. This leads to the lack of fundamental knowledge for children. For example, children who focus on study math and others science subjects often do not like literature. But literature helps us to develop our communication skill. If educators lead their students to not have to learn literature, children will not be able to develop a proper communication skill.
      In conclusion, every subject have its vital role in life and early selective study will created major problem for children. Therefore, I am totally disagree with the statement that studying unwanted subjects is a waste of time.

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    • yhao.luong

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      August 20, 2019 at 1:33 pm

      Attached is the essay that has been revised

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