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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here

leminhnganhang2003
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February 25, 2020 at 3:19 pm
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Hi bạn
Bài của bạn nhầm lẫn đề bài ngay từ mở bài, việc phát triển ý không mạch lạc và nhiều chỗ không đúng trọng tâm. Phần từ ngữ còn sai lỗi chính tả chính tả nhiều. Bạn xem lại giúp mình nha.
Chúc bạn học tốt !
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