[Bella]

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

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[lanh]

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Lanh.

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[Bella]

Hi Lanh,

Thank you very much for your reply.

I thought it’s one way you can answer for the agree or disagree question that you think you agree that it’s too much and you think it’s good.
Can you please explain more about your opinion?
How can you answer this question?
How you plan your ideas?

Thanks!

Kind Regards,
Bella

[lanh]

Hi Bella,
If you agree that it’s too much, hence in the body, you have to explain WHY you think that it’s too much. For example, news on media channels, a huge of money spent on habitat reservations, the protection of wild animals and birds is a compulsory subject at schools, etc.
If you don’t agree with the topic, read this sample: https://www.facebook.com/giaidethiielts/posts/865145276861232
If you have any further questions, please let me know.
Best!
Lanh.

[Bella]

Hi Lanh,

thank you very much for your email.

I agree with your opinion, however from my point of view, i think we can understand the question like that:

People think it’s too much but i don’t think so because there are many benefits from paying too much attention on protecting wild animal.
For example, you can say: dont drink too much milk. I can oppose: it’s alright, it’s good for your health.

I also searched on the internet and found some sample answers where they have same opinion like me.

Happy to chat more about it.

Cheers,
Bella