• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    Victoria Pham updated 8 years ago 2 Members · 2 Posts
    • Trinh

      Participant
      July 18, 2017 at 9:35 am

      In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
      What are your opinions on this issue?
      In this day and age, people tend to create some types of paid work for the youngsters. Some people believe that this is a totally wrong doing, while the opponents of this idea regard this as priceless work qualifications and at great necessity for either learning or having a sense of responsibility. While there are backdraws for the children when doing these work, I would argue that they should be familiar themselves with such kind of employment.
      On the one hand, forcing the students who are in the schooling age to work in a small factory is the cruel act. At this time, they deserve to have the best quality of life and an opportunity to pay undivided attention to their study rather than working hard to support their life. As a result, they are likely to care less about their study level and have difficulties in catching up with the other students. Furthermore , children working as

      employers, in some nations, is commiting an offence. For example, the government in the UK prohibit all the children under eighteen to work in the companies.
      On the other hand, I do believe that working under such condition provide children with a variety of real experience, which allows them to guarantee a successful career in the future. This is due to the soon preparation and basic skills they obtain before coming to the society. Moreover, they are able to live independently relying on their salary level they get, which is the major importance for all the citizens nowadays. This might help them to chase the top jobs because of their knowledge and experience.
      In conclusion, while getting ready to the perspective employment affects the students seriously, it seems to me that the advantages of working early make it a better choice

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    • Victoria Pham

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      July 19, 2017 at 6:59 am

      [7/18/2017, 8:00:24 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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