• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Le Quoc Tuan

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      April 22, 2018 at 10:53 pm

      The bar chart illustrates the gender proportion in the academic worceforce of several major faculties in a prestigious iniversity in 2012 application. Overall, it is noticeable that women appeared mostly in arts and education while there was a high number of men in business, engineering, law and science faculties.
      In arts, most of specialists working there were female just under 60 per cent. However, the year 2012 saw a vastly difference in the business faculty when the percentage of men were twice higher than that of women. When it comes to engineering, men outnumbered women by around 70 per cent.
      By contrast, number of female staff was far higher than that of male members which accounted for just above 20% of total academic employees. It is interesting to note that the figures of law and science were quite the same to each other with a roughly 40%-male figure. Medicine experienced the equal level of male and female.

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    • hoangthuychi6

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      April 23, 2018 at 8:00 pm

      If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me!

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    • Le Quoc Tuan

      Participant
      April 27, 2018 at 4:53 pm

      Thank. except for a few comments that I replied, you helped me realise my mistakes. Good enough. Please check some points which are not clear. You’re right about how to get positive points from the model because it has many spelling and grammar mistakes, doesn’t it?

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