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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis . What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
ESSAY
In modern life , many people have lost the habit of walking regularly . While there are various reasons for this trend , some measures can be taken to encourage them to take up walking as their daily routine.
In my opinion, there are two main reasons why this tendency is declining . Firstly , the development of technology discourages some people from walking. Individuals may go to the offices by taxes , buses or private cars that is probably convenient and time-saving , but leads them to be lazier. Secondly , leisure area has been transgressed by at-home stores , advertising services , and other illegal activities. Therefore walking people will have unpleasant feeling when having narrower spaces, gradually they are fearful of hardship.
There are measures which needs to be implemented to improve this negative situation. One measure is that the government should abolish automatic devises in low- floor buildings . This will certainly cause a opposed attitude at first , in contrast , afterwards citizens are accustomed to walking to enjoy surroundings. Another measure is that the district law may be brought about to pave the way for pedestrians. Covering it by planting more trees could provide relief from rain and sunshines .
In conclusion , in spite of some reasons infuencing people adversely , the residents need to link with the authority to develop this situation.

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