Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
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10/08/2019
Task 1:
The pie chart below shows information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995.The pie charts show a comparison of the highest education level among females in Someland between 1945 and 1995.
Overall, it can be seen that more women got educated in Someland in 1995 than that in 1945.
Firstly, in 1945, the education level for woman in Someland was poor and very terrible. More than one-third women in Someland did not chance to go to school and other one-third only completed their education at third grade. In addition, there was no postgraduate woman and less than 1% woman in this year managed to get the first degree.
On the other hand, in 1995, it witnessed lots of remarkable improvements in the schooling rates of women in Someland. The porpotion of women achieving first degree accounted for above 50%, while that of females completed their post graduation was 20%. Besides, there were no women who were unattended to school, only finished their education experiences at third and sixth grades.
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