Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
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The pie charts demonstrate the amount of energy used by Australian and also the greenhouse gas emission which is caused by the usage of energy.
Hi Tuan Ha,
My name is Nhu. Please find attached below your essay corrected by me. If you have any concerns about my correction, please do not hesitate to leave me feedbacks. Thank you very much for joining us. Hope to receive your next essays. Good luck!Hi Như, I really appreciate for your correcting, but i have a question, is it fine to describe the number like this “15% versus 28% for the former and 7% versus 14% for the latter” in your writing. To be honest, i rarely find it in any writing example. So how do you think ?
Hi Tuan Ha,
“Versus” here means “compared to”. This sentence compared the 2 figures between the first and the second chart. I admitted that this kind of expression is not very popular. I just want to use various types of structure to avoid repeating mistakes. But if you are still not sure about this, you may use other structure wih the same meaning.
Thank you.
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