The first pie chart illustrates data on distinct categories of the poor households in UK in the year 2002. The following pie graphs compare two seperated year in terms of the most well-known pastime activities in the America.
Overall, the sole parents and the single living in poverty accounted for the biggest proportion in the first chart. In both the second graphs, walking in the leisure time was prefered than the other activities.
In the first pie chart, the number of poor people was higher in the sole parents and single without children, at approximately a quarter. The second-largest rate could be seen in the couple with their offsprings and all housholds, at 15% and 14% respectively. Only 5% of the total number of people in the UK are the old having a poor life.
In the second pie graphs, the largest rate of leisure activities was walking, and this figure increased slightly from 29% to 31% over a decade. Swimming also witnessed a significant surge, at 18% by 2009. In contrast, this figures for jogging and bicycling had downward trends and stood at exactly 3% and 7% respectively.Attachments:
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