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It is true that children reared in poorer families are better prepared in comparison with their counterparts from rich families. While I accept that many people could concur with this, I believe that a solid foundation for future could only be provided by sufficient finance will be others notions.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why children who come from poorer families tend to be more ready for their own life in the future. One reason is that the shortage of fulfillment in their childhood motivated them to try their best to earn as much money as possible and at least they can achieve life value. Furthermore, unlike clinging teenage having rich parents, they are very self-reliant. They rely on themselves more than on their parents. As a result, being independent will be a big advantage for them in later life.
On the other hand, many parents believe that because nowadays, education becomes more and more accessible to the masses, as well as the exploding population, the only way to stand out and survive in a cutthroat system is to be succeeded in academic activities. That will be only achieve when children‘s parents can pay for better education in a reputable private school or university or can afford better sports equipment and latest gadgets. Therefore strong finance does play an essential part in children development and even help them compete with more advantageous position.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that poor children could be more ready for their later career, but this is by no mean rich children don’t have any merits.
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