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Topic: Scientist agree that people are damaging their healthy by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is true that junk food has many detrimental effects on human health. While some people consider that education is as an ineffective measure to solve the problem. I would like to contend that this practice would serve as a definitely workable solution to tackle such an issue.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why educational programs might not be effective way in the battle against junk foods. The first one is that industrial lifestyle is the roof of this issue in which people are all in a hurry due to work pressure. They are always short of time to prepare their meals. As a result, they choose fast food for their lunch or dinner for the sake of time consuming in spite of potential health risks they might face. Furthermore, hamburger or chicken fried are delicious and additive dish. Therefore, they have become a popular food especially for children and adolescence who did not perceived the health consequences of their eating habit.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that educational programs could play apart in preventing people from excessive consumption of junk food. Firstly, through these programs, people might be able to aware of the various harmful impacts of this kind of food. For instance, once people gain adequate knowledge and awareness of life-threating cancer and diseases caused by overeating fast food, they will curb the consumption of junk food which might pose serious threats to their health. Secondly, education about nutrition diets at school can help to form healthy eating habits for children at their childhood. This can promote acknowledgement about the benefits of healthy diets and warm against the potential risks of fast food.
In conclusion, although there are many arguments against education, I firmly believe that educational measure play a vital role to mitigate junk food consumption and deter the problem from being exacerbated further.

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