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Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. What is your opinion?
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There are some people argue that the complete ban of smoking is necessary and exigent. In fact, there are a lot of evil influences of smoking to health and it violates non-smokers’ right and freedom. However, I personally disagree with this opinion.
Firstly, tobacco industry carries abundant advantages to the government’s revenue. Indeed, tobacco is a commodity to tax, so the government can enrich the national budget by imposing high tax on tobacco products. Additionally, this industry employs a lot of workers that contributes to reducing the unemployment rate. The more people go to work the more income tax go into the National Treasury.
Secondly, smoking is just a personal hobby and enjoyment. It is stress reliever and can bring great contentment to smokers. Therefore, it is difficult and painful for smokers to giving up their habit. Those people who advocate the ban lay too much emphasis on the right of non-smokers, and they ignore smokers’ right.
We must admit that there is a definite dink between smoking and health. However if we smoke in moderation, it will not do great harm to our health. In history, many famous people, such as uncle Ho Chi Minh smoked and enjoyed a long life expectancy.
To sum up, I do not agree that the government should ban smoking completely. The tobacco industry contributes much to the national economy. Moreover, smoking brings many psychological benefits to smokers.

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