[Nguyễn Trần Mai Anh]

Topic: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that working right after graduating from high school is a positive approach for students. However, in my own state, I believe that everyone had better keep on their education at high levels to have a better job.
There are two main reasons why students should get a job straight. Firstly, earning money early offers opportunities to gain real experiences such as controlling finance or teamwork. These skills will lead them to have more career prospects, especially for young people who want to be self-employed. It is derived from the fact that there are a lot of people who give up attending university are their own boss thanks to working with their hands in an early age. Secondly, young people who decide to start working instead of going to college often become more independent from their parents than the others. Therefore, they are able to easily run their own business and afford to buy houses, cars and take care of their family.
On the other hand, I think that attending higher educational courses is the most suitable way. It is incapable of becoming a doctor or a lawyer without any degrees. Besides, university or college provides you a qualification which offers you a wide range of chances of applying for your future job. For example, obviously, the employers or managers will choose the people who have a diploma rather than having no qualifications. In addition, after completing your Master or Ph.D. courses, more and more promotion prospects brought to you will brighten your future a lot.
In conclusion, there is a wide range of appropriate reasons both for maintaining your higher education and choosing a job after high school. In my opinion, I am personally in favour of going to university or college to ensure my future occupation.
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